Sunday, October 14, 2012

Lorenzo Budel

Hi ! My name is Lorenzo, I' m 16 years old and I attend the third class in a High School called Liceo Dal Piaz, in Feltre. My hobbies are listening to music, playing with videogames and watching football matches. I'm friendly, reliable and I love meet new people. I' m a goalkeeper in a team named Plavis, which is the name of a local association, too. I love travelling : I have been in big cities like London, Barcelona, Munich, Rome and Milan and in other. I can speak English,Spanish and I am very good at sports. In the future I will travel to the USA because I love that country for football, basketball and for its culture. I haven' t got any working experiences but I do the best I can in everything I do.

PLEASE TAKE NOTES OF MY LAST CORRECTIONS AND RE-WRITE THE PARAGRAPH ON THIS PAGE. REMEMBER YOU MUSTN'T DELETE THE ABOVE
GZ



Hi ! My name is Lorenzo, I' m 16 years old and I attend the third class in a High School called Liceo Dal Piaz, in Feltre. My hobbies are listening to music, playing  videogames and watching football matches. I'm friendly, reliable and I love meeting new people. I' m a goalkeeper in a team named Plavis, which is the name of a local association, too. I love travelling: I have been in big cities like London, Barcelona, Munich, Rome and  Milan. I can speak English, Spanish and I am very good at sports. In the future I will travel to the USA because I love that country for football, basketball and for its culture. I haven' t got any working experiences but I do the best I can in everything I do.

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  1. UnknownOctober 17, 2012 at 3:33 PM

    HI LORENZO, I PASTED YOUR PROFILE WITH MY CORRECTIONS: MISTAKES ARE INTO BRACKETS AND I AM USING CAPITAL LETTERS FOR MY CORRECTIONS AS I HAVE NO OTHER MEANS AT THE MOMENT. PLEASE CORRECT AND COMPLETE YOUR PARAGRAPH.

    Hi ! My name is Lorenzo , I' m 16 years old and I attend the third class (at)IN A High School CALLED ...., in Feltre.
    My hobbies are LISTENING music, play... with videogames and (see)WATCHING (the) football matches.
    I' m a goalkeeper in A (Society) TEAM NAMED ...., SPONSORED BY "Plavis", A LOCAL ASSOCIATION.
    I love travel... : I have been in (important)BIG cities LIKE London, Barcelona , Munich , Rome and Milan. In the future I will travel (in)TO THE USA because I love that (Countries) COUNTRY for football , basketball and FOR ITS culture.
    I' m friendly, reliable and I love meet... new people.

    YOU SHOULD ADD SOMETHING ABOUT YOUR ABILITIES (WHAT YOU CAN DO, WHAT YOU ARE GOOD AT) AND SOME EXPERIENCES THAT COULD PROVE YOUR SKILLS

    GZ

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    1. UnknownOctober 19, 2012 at 9:38 PM

      Hi ! My name is Lorenzo, I' m 16 years old and I attend the third class in High School called Dal Piaz in Feltre.
      My hobbies are listening music, play with videogames and watching the football matches.
      I' m a goalkeeper in a team named Plavis a local association.
      I love travel : I have been in London, Barcelona , Munich , Rome , Milan and in other big cities. In the future I will travel to USA because I love that Country for football , basketball and for its culture.
      I' m friendly, reliable and I love meet new people...
      I didn't have the opportunity to stay in foreign cauntry, alone without my family.

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