Sunday, October 21, 2012

Elisa Moretta

Hi, my name is Elisa and I'm fifteen. I live in Sovramonte with my dad and my younger sister. Sovramonte is a small village situated located in the North-East of Italy. I'm very outgoing, cheerful, patient, avaible helpful and above all hard-working.
I can work as a waitress: I can clear and lay the tables, see the guest to the table and do the washing-up in the kitchen. In fact I have some experience in working in a restaurant with a lot of people a day: because I worked in a restaurant I have done that for three summers.
I really loved it because it made me grow up and improve my skills mentally and as a person, also if even though it has been was difficult at the beginning!

LEAVE THE ORIGINAL PARAGRAPH AS IT IS NOW AND RE-WRITE A NEW PARAGRAPH, ON THIS PAGE, WITHOUT MISTAKES AND, POSSIBLY, WITH SOME MORE INFORMATION ON YOUR ABILITIES ( I AM ALSO GOOD AT ... I CAN ...).

DEADLINE: 24TH OCTOBER 5.00 PM



Hi, my name is Elisa and I'm fifteen. I live in Sovramonte with my dad and my younger sister. Sovramonte is a small village located in the North-East of Italy. I'm very outgoing, cheerful, patient, helpful and above all hard-working.
I can work as a waitress: I can clear and lay the tables, see the guest to the table and do the washing-up in the kitchen. I also can can also take orders from the table and entertain guests. I'm good at cash up at the and of the day  too, in fact I have some experience in working in a restaurant with a lot of people a day: I have done that for three summers.
I really loved it even though it was difficult at the beginning, because it made me grow up and improve my skills: even if it's also when some work is not part of my duty, but I can learn very fast and I do the best I can in all things I do!,  ,



I MOVED SOME SENTENCES IN BETTER PLACES

TAKE NOTES OF MY LAST CORRECTIONS, THEN IT'S OK
GZ

2 comments:

  1. sorry prof, does "take notes of my last corrections" means that I have to copy without errors or that it's ok?? =)

    ReplyDelete
  2. It means look, write notes (what you need to remember) on your notebook and keep them in mind:)!

    ReplyDelete

Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.